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Re: Writing Competition #1
LordTomyh Thu Feb 02, 2012 4:14 pm
I hope this helps, It's what I use to help me find a rhyme 
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- http://www.rhymer.com/
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Re: Writing Competition #1
Damxge Fri Feb 10, 2012 1:06 am
Yes, Drag is disqualified from this round for not meeting the deadline 
Sorry for the hold up mate, I'll get the voting up in a minute.
Okay! Round 3! Its pretty simple, just write a story to do with Dragons, and submit it here.
Killer is already done. So Drag, don't be late.
Deadline for this one is 2/18/2012. That gives you guys nine days.
Sorry for the hold up mate, I'll get the voting up in a minute.
Okay! Round 3! Its pretty simple, just write a story to do with Dragons, and submit it here.
Killer is already done. So Drag, don't be late.
Deadline for this one is 2/18/2012. That gives you guys nine days.
Damxge- Rook
Re: Writing Competition #1
killer8529 Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:35 pm
just asking what happened to drags poem did he just not get it done or was it other reasons
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Re: Writing Competition #1
LordTomyh Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:33 am
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- I slowly crept through the bushes, careful not to make a sound. The wind was behind me yet I knew it did not carry my scent. The wind could not carry what didn’t exist.
Slowly my target came into view, a young women sitting at the river bank, alone, her silver hair running like a waterfall down her back, reflecting the light of the sun, almost blinding me.
“I have you now” I whispered to myself, before leaping high into the air, covering the distance in seconds.
“Your Mine Now!”
The girl spun towards me, so fast the light blurred around her, and smacked me hard in the chest with a perfectly straight tree trunk, the size of 23 metres. The wood shattered on contact with my body but still launched me far to the left, into a bend in the river with a loud splash.
I broke the surface cursing as the girl was laughing in a melodious rich voice. “Got you again Londain” the girl said, as I heaved onto the river bank, soaked to the bone, spitting out a fish stupid enough to swim into my open mouth. Again with the tree trunk trick Lunae ... Is this forest going to have any trees left if you keep pulling that?” I picked up a shard of the tree, a splinter as large as my head and crushed it to sawdust. My sister smiled joyfully and picked up the remains on the trunk she had been holding, gripping it in both hands, producing a pile of sawdust at her feet.
I let out a curt laugh and went to speak when a loud roar ripped through the air, both of us leaping to our feet and starring deep into the forest towards the source.
“Gods damn them two; they can’t stay out of trouble”
“The Twins are children in eternal bodies, they can’t help it Londain” I sighed loudly and took off into the forest, moving faster than any creature alive, the forest came into sharp focus, every detail, every sight open to my eyes. Behind me I heard Lunae following me, dancing gracefully through the woods as we moved at speeds to reduce us to shadows on the wind
“It’s a good thing Father isn’t here, He would skin these two” I called back, dancing around a group of men skinning a deer, none noticing my presence. “Even better that Ebenum and Ivan are with him, or their fun could mean even bigger trouble”
I exploded into a small clearing, almost getting hit full in the face by a plume of emerald fire, ducking aside at the last second. I found myself in a burnt out crater, facing a small emerald dragon the size of horse, flying around in circles trying to set alight two men. One was a tall dark skinned man, his body rippling with muscle, short coarse hair covering his head and twin points of ruby for his eyes.
The other was a short thin man, his body almost thin as a stick, his skin darker than mine but with a slight yellowish tinge, his long sandy blonde hair tied back in a long pony tail his amethyst like eyes flashing brightly as he dodged and ducked the dragons fire.
“Greetings Brother, we found this green lizard and decided to have a little fun” The dark skinned landed next to me, his face split by a smile. I punched him hard in the muscular shoulder “Zulyn you great African Oath. That’s A Germanic Poison Spitter. Even their corrosive breath can kill us” The other man landed besides me, also grinning widely. “It’s just a bit of sport Londain” We call looked at the dragon as it finally found us and took a deep breath.
“Incoming”? We all dodged out of the way as a great ball or emerald fire exploded where we stood, dissolving the rock underneath. I landed on the left of the creature, on all fours like a cat. It roared and turned on me, taking in another deep breath. “Oh Come on that’s Not Fair! I Didn’t Do Anything” I yelled at it as another fire ball launched over my head, flash frying a tree.
“I don’t Think It Likes You Brother” Shouted my oriental brother from high in one of the untouched trees, Zulyn was standing at the base laughing at me.
“Xing You pissed it off and I’ve Got to Pay for It” I yelled back as I leapt high into the air, over a wave of fire. I landed on the creatures back, grabbing onto a upturned scale and holding on tightly as the dragon began trying to throw me off, twisting and turning through the charred wood, throwing itself back first into trees.
“LONDAIN! WHAT IN FATHERS NAME ARE YOU DOING” I couldn’t look up yet I knew who was standing at the edge of the burnt crater, watching as I struggled to hold on for dear half-life. “I’M TRYING TO FIX THEIR MESS LUNAE” The dragon rolled over in the air and I saw the twin rolling on the burnt floor laughing so hard they should be crying. I was about to yell out at them when the dragon bucked underneath me, the scale ripping away from its body in my hand. I flew into the hair, higher and higher as below the dragon looked up and opened its jaws wide
“Oh you’ve got To Be Kidding Me!” I reached the zenith of my flight and began to descent rapidly towards the creatures open mouth, watching in slow motion as the back of it’s gullet began to light up. I looked down at the scale in my hand, my mind working over endless possibilities on how to avoid it’s emerald fire. My body acted first, throwing the scale straight and true down its throat. The dragons jaws snapped shut just as the fire erupted from it’s gullet, closing in around the fire just in time. I breathed a sigh of relief when the dragon head, all it’s skin and muscle jest exploded into green fire. I saw the bony fire proof skull through the flames as the3y consumed the rest of it’s body.
Something crashed into me, knocking me away from the fire rising to consume me. I landed hard on the ground, gouging out a line of rock with my body, A shadow loomed over me, tall and menacing, with almost white skin, long flowing colourless hair and piercing yellow eyes. My breathe froze in my throat and my heart would of stopped if it already hadn’t
“Hello Father” He looked down at me, concerned and disapproving, his eyes staring into my soul. I pointed at the twins, not taking my eyes of him “They started it father” I heard them about to protest when someone banged their heads together, knocking them to the ground. I shot a glance at the girl standing over them and my heart almost thudded back to life.
“Londain” I returned my gaze to the man standing over me, he was holding out his hand, waiting to help me up. Without hesitation I grasped it and he pulled me to my feet, for the thousandth time. “Always looking out and cleaning after your brothers.” His melodious angelic voice washed over me, soothing me. “I know you’ll one day turn into a fine leader of my children” He said, ruffling my hair like my real father use to do, so very long ago. He turned to the dragon skeleton, now a burnt pile of bones. “This will make a very good trophy and a reminder my children, a lesion, On why not to mess with every creature toy come across” He shot a glance at the twins, rubbing their heads. Kneeling down he picked up the dragon skull, holding it aloft to the sun. I stared up at the cream coloured bone, thinking of the creature it had once belonged to.
“And a lesion on not to mess with dragons father” He turned to me, a gentle smile on his face. “Didn’t I just say that Londain”
And if anyone was wondering the dragon skull on the Ancient one's desk in his secret lab when he's talking to Drag/Felix is the same skull from this story
LordTomyh- Rook
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Re: Writing Competition #1
Damxge Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:37 am
He just didn't complete it in time and I had to start the voting since it had already gone over more than a few days.
He'll hopefully write something for the last round, or it'll just be between you and Tomyh.
As well, if you want to see the prize for winning
SOwheeet. And now we're waiting on Drag again XD
He'll hopefully write something for the last round, or it'll just be between you and Tomyh.
As well, if you want to see the prize for winning
SOwheeet. And now we're waiting on Drag again XD
Damxge- Rook
Re: Writing Competition #1
killer8529 Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:44 am
And if anyone was wondering the dragon skull on the Ancient one's desk in his secret lab when he's talking to Drag/Felix is the same skull from this story.
what from where i conufsed
what from where i conufsed
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Re: Writing Competition #1
LordTomyh Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:46 am
Sorry ... The dragon skull the Ancient One's Father was holding in the end of my story later appears in 1841 on the desk of the Ancient one in his seceret lab while he's talking to Drag's character Felix in my RP The Hidden World of London
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Re: Writing Competition #1
Damxge Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:48 am
You should join the RP Killer, its a lot of fun, and its still open.
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Re: Writing Competition #1
LordTomyh Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:50 am
and if you do join please don't go Warlock ... we have three already (Witches count) .. you could be a dragon like Demon ... just have to look human enough to blend in with society
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Re: Writing Competition #1
killer8529 Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:52 am
mat the only charter that i will even play with is a dragon cross something hay is there a bad guy yet if not i might join
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Re: Writing Competition #1
Damxge Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:56 am
Oh there's a bad guy...a real bad guy XD
I'm so subtle...
Now! We need to get back on topic! We should take this discussion to the London RP Interest Check.
I'm so subtle...
Now! We need to get back on topic! We should take this discussion to the London RP Interest Check.
Damxge- Rook
Re: Writing Competition #1
LordTomyh Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:57 am
Cross is the bad guy but he could always use a partner ... or you can be a second bad guy that just causes havoc for the good guys )Me, Drag and Lanax atm) AND Cross
Warlock - A human who got his hand on some Magic or a Human child injected giving demon blood inside the womb. Basically a Wizard or sorcerer who can live to around 300-400 years. [I forgot to add this sorry] All warlock have a demonic deformity on their body, examples being bright blue skin, cat like eyes, incredible size, horns, tails, claws, talons, bird feet, etc. So be creative [Sorry for not adding that earlier]
(Diabinem) - Human/Demon hybrid
The reason dragons arn't playable is I though they'd be too OP ... I was going to make it that they can shape shift between mortal human guise and true form (Like in WoW) and live for like 3000 years ... so Dragon Human hybrid is possible
Warlock - A human who got his hand on some Magic or a Human child injected giving demon blood inside the womb. Basically a Wizard or sorcerer who can live to around 300-400 years. [I forgot to add this sorry] All warlock have a demonic deformity on their body, examples being bright blue skin, cat like eyes, incredible size, horns, tails, claws, talons, bird feet, etc. So be creative [Sorry for not adding that earlier]
(Diabinem) - Human/Demon hybrid
The reason dragons arn't playable is I though they'd be too OP ... I was going to make it that they can shape shift between mortal human guise and true form (Like in WoW) and live for like 3000 years ... so Dragon Human hybrid is possible
LordTomyh- Rook
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Re: Writing Competition #1
killer8529 Mon Feb 13, 2012 6:37 am
ok whens the final vote coming on plz tell
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Re: Writing Competition #1
Damxge Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:46 am
Cross wrote:Deadline for the second round is February 7th. Please submit your poems before then.
Deadline for the third round is February 18th. Please submit your work about Dragons before then.
Damxge- Rook
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LordTomyh- Rook
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Re: Writing Competition #1
Damxge Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:35 am
Comp deadline is today. Hell of an admin Drag is lol.
Congrats Tomyh, you won two of the rounds, you take the prize.
Congrats Tomyh, you won two of the rounds, you take the prize.
Damxge- Rook
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