final fantasy prologe please skrap

hay all this is the prologe of the one i am planing to make a expert rpg but i need to work out a few kinks so hears the idea also if you have played final fantasy 10 i recomend you join and this has nothing to do with the expert rpg later

story:during the start off of the blitz ball (if you dont know its like football in a gaint orb of water just look it up and you will know what i mean) seasion a creature appers named Sin (a gaint whale thing thats the best i can do) and destroys the city you and three others are sucked into sin though and tosed 1000 years into the future where you find the world destroyed and in tatters just barly holding on to life soon after you find a temple and your given the four beasts called aeons know as valfore, bahumit, shiva and onix (there are pics of those beast down the bottem) and your told by the aeons way of speeking(a small boy pic at bottom as well) that you are to kill sin but before you can you must learn to live by your aeon and trust it and become friends with it
players
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chacarter sheet
name:
most liked aeon: (the one you want but i will decied yes or no because there perticualer)
personanilty:(please be descriptive)
looks like:
weapons:(sword only but you can choose cetain things about which be later)

Spoiler:

so if i could have four players please join nothing to outlandish and all human

name:Jack Crowley
most liked aeon:Onix fo sho
personanilty:Very funny and is very,very rarely serious about something,kinda friendly and a good friend,agreeable,totally not arrogant but doesn't let people walk all over him and will protect something he deeply cares about...like a jewel or a giant diamond,And onix!
looks like:Black hair with small spikes running down the middle of his head,loose black shirt and ebony trousers,headphones around his neck and red and blue football boots
weapons:The sword you talked about but with a red jewel in the middle,golden handle.

(descriptive enough?)

yes but i but forgive me for this the sword is completly wrong there is a reason why i said you can choise things about it later but note i am not quiet certain about the personanilty if you were this person i doubt you would be like that but its you charcter so we will see about i will tell you a few things later tonight that will needed so you have all the data about certain things and you have played Final fantasy 10 before have you not

No...I heard of it tho...

ok onix is gone for now but i will give detail bout the sword soon

YUS!!!!I GOT ONIX!!!!YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!

I am tempted to break your hart now but I wont

Aw gawd...what happens to Onix...?

oh nothing but AS SOON AS WE GET PEOPLE we can see if this can work